Vrindavan had unexpectedly faded away from within
Leaving me to severe longing, in scorching sun,
The moments,sewing apprehensions into hours
The strings of heart playing heaving silence.
A light year of a wink has passed incessently
since this unsaid pangs of thoughtlessness.
Hard realizations yet to be acknowledged.
Your haughty arrogance,My illuminated passion.
Then I saw the peacock plumes melting your proud soul
And churning sweetness of togetherness.
You have heard me my Lord,
And found my misplaced smiles for me.
The tears I had shed to dampen your soul
is now housing a thousand rainbow drops.
Blessed am I to live in oblivion
unlike many tired hearts melting in burning chillness
I see myself drowned in an .ocean of Bansuri-strains,
the ripples of rhythm lulling me to the banks of Yamuna.
I am now in that way,where we once parted.
Once again ,a while with a thin veil of hope anew.
And burning my worries out, filling around,
the aroma of red-madder blossoms
In the luster of your emerald smile.
A little tired was I after you were gone,but not the end.
And the time is ripe now,
to be lost in the unfathomable rays of your Blackness.
And forgive me, for, this sin of my ever evolving ,passionate Heart.
8 comments:
Dear Joe,
The plight of a yearning soul that had the colours & fragrance of vrindavan
that once filled ur heart with a ray of hope,which later seemed to fade away
leaving you in the hot desert sun,
the drooping soul that still holds hope,
the faith that beckons the farthest hope,
the love thats destined to reach your hope,
All,all joe have been very well portrayed leaving me too
in a state of faith & hope to join you with those lost smiles gained,
and be beside you when you are lost in those rays,leading you to your passionate heart.
It is very nicely written with lot of intensity and feeling
Dear Joe,
Faith is something that gives strength to hopes,
Hope is something that gives strength to dream,
Dreams are something that gives strength to life,
Life is something that needs strength through faith, hope & dreams...
all these have been very well portrayed through this beautiful post of yours joe, where we can find the lost hope but not lost faith and then your gained smiles.Happy to read it and to know it..
Dear Binu and partha uncle,
Just a thanks would sound very formal..still my heartfelt gratitude to all those who read my posts and support me genuinely..
love
joe
dear readers dais,
sorry to slip out your name..
the surprise was that we posted simultaneously and i saw Ur comment only after my expressing gratitude to aksharam and partha..U have always been a good critic of mine.hoping it would be so for years to come too.
wishes
joe
Reinstates in the minds of the readers, the effectiveness of faith and dreaming postive ...
I douhbt whether this piece of writing lack the usual flow that can be seen in your previous writings.. ( it is only just a doubt.. I am not the person to judge..)
The words are capable enough to draw the picture in the mind of the reader..
Hi Jyotsna,
Thanks for the comments. I am new to your blog and its a good space to visit often.
You write really well.
Keep writing...
Regards,
Abhilash
Dear Joe,
Good Evening!
I am so happy that you have found the right way to my beloved Kannan.And I must tell you,Kannan forgives all.
Aksharam has put the views very well and now Abhi has visited your blog.The rest he will be doing if not for the years to come.:)
But I love all those who are with my Kannan.And I really wish the readers start going to temple and having the Divine Darsha Of Lord Kannan.
Right now,believe me you are in my prayers and don't worry.
Wishing you peace and happiness,
Sasneham,
Anu
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